Friday, March 13, 2015

March 12,2015

He develops His Story in Many Different ways he Develops it By Making It Sound LIKE A regular Story And Then adding A weird Twist. H makes His Characters Real By making The Story Sound real. He always Incorporates his twist at the end because all the suspense happens at the end

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  1. Seems like you have an understanding of the story, just use evidence from the story. You're really vague and somebody who hasn't read the story might not know what your points are

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  2. Good, but add a little more detail to it.

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